This poem was first written as a short story. But a little modification turned it into a rather nice poem. It's a lament, with a sarcastic under-tone, for the blindness of man toward his own fallen nature.
Etched In Glass
by Alice Markley
A little city, trapped in a prism of light,
Built with such care, wrought with pain and delight.
Surrounded by glass, visible to all
Untouchable perfection, details so small.
Marvelous city, everyone's city.
Made by all hands, bearing the marks of so many.
No one man its creator or ruler to call,
So it was made, so it was governed by all.
In its youth it had struggled, as all things must do,
Tumultuous leader razed, the next replaced too.
Parts of it fell, shaken by quarrel and strife,
But they were rebuilt, working together toward life.
Year after long year, time finally finished its work.
Man had learned together, the city was perfect.
Built with meticulous time, it was full of time,
Roads of the past, and future's towers fine.
Arches woven of empires long gone,
Windows that peered into empires to come.
Man took pride in displaying what was passed,
And hope in the future that he had guessed.
The city encompassed all times, peoples, races,
It was one with itself, perfectly unified in all places.
Man would choose its ending as he had chose its beginning
A symbol of man's power and what he was capable of achieving.
It its prison of clearest glass that gleamed,
Its towers reached as high as man could dream.
As low as man could stoop was its earth,
A declaration of what man was worth.
In its bubble, the city was self-sustained.
Needing nothing but itself to keep it maintained.
It was a glory to behold, an envied work,
The city was perfect, man was perfect.
And the little city, etched in glass, belonging to all,
Finally reached the end of its plummeting fall.
The city of man, glorifying all that mattered,
Upon reaching the ground ... shattered.
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Comments
Wonderful
What I love most about this poem is the depth of your insight. It has such irony. Perhaps the true meaning is too oblique for people who don't know you, Aisling. But I love it as a poem. And if I didn't know you, I'd love it anyway. I'd probably ponder on the meaning for a long time.
The imagery stays with me.
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No more compromise, no more room for lies.
No more giving in to a world of sin.
-"No More Compromise" by Rubicon 7
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I get up, I walk, I fall down. Meanwhile, I keep dancing. - Hillel
Wow.
I liked this alot! The question is why didn't you tell me about this before today?
That's all well and good Billy, I said, but your pants are on fire.
"Adolescence is not a period that defines you, it's a period you define." - me
Gems
This really is one of those hidden gems that hide out on the site. I'm not usually one for poetry, but this stuff is good.
ttyl
--Alex Markley
And with that, the chubby one became illiterate with excitement.
Alex Markley
“Objects in mirror seem closer than they appear.”
WOW!
AWESOME, WOW, COOL, SWEET.......I can't find enough praising words to describe your poem, Ais!!!!
When I read it I looked like this --->

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Come now children what's wrong? You should be panting with delight!
♥♫♪◉☼
Would you rather raise an army, or go out on your own?
ditto indeed
really, really good!!! excellent!!
"...Though I may be forced to faint if my imagination gets the better of me."
-- Anne Shirley
I hope and pray that none may kill me,
Nor I kill any, with woundings grim,
But if ever any should think to kill me,
I pray Thee, God, let me kill him.
That's so awesome
I write some, too. The problem is that I've had writer's block for over a year now
!!!
I really wish that I knew what to write
... still got nothing 
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Insanity only brings people closer
No more denying. Stop trying to hide from it.
People are praying. They're saying their hope is near.
- "Destiny", Spirit Blade
A poet's soul
Aisling has a truely poetic soul. Her inspiration for this poem was such an ordinary object, yet she saw so much in it. All of her poetry is like that. And her stories are, too. Aisling's writings make me cry more often than just about anything else!
But it's a good kind of crying.
I guess.
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No more compromise, no more room for lies.
No more giving in to a world of sin.
-"No More Compromise" by Rubicon 7
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I get up, I walk, I fall down. Meanwhile, I keep dancing. - Hillel
A good idea
EVERYONE READ THIS POEM AND COMMENT ON IT!
In fact, we should all go to MEDIA in the left hand column, and click on something, TEXT, for instance, read the contribution, and comment on it. Our artists are contributing, but they're not getting feedback. We need to let them know that we appreciate their work and enjoy their artistic output. Artists die on the vine without positive and helpful feedback.
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No more compromise, no more room for lies.
No more giving in to a world of sin.
-"No More Compromise" by Rubicon 7
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I get up, I walk, I fall down. Meanwhile, I keep dancing. - Hillel
Ummm
This poem has been sitting here for so long. Suddenly I feel very silly over the attention.
...I wish there was a blushing smiley.
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"And tell Graham - tell him: see. ... Tell him to see. And tell Merrill to swing away." - Signs
You know how to raspberry, don't you Steve? You just put your tongue out and blow.